I have already finished an essay, and I received my professor’s comments about that essay as well. I need to revise it, fix it better and to get higher grade.
This is the essay’s topic: Should there be a legal for-profit capitalist market in human kidneys?
I have finished this paper and I got 87/100. I needs someone helps me to improve it and get better grade.
I will show my essay and professor’s comments later.